宝安中学和深二外的作文纷纷选中“爱你老己”题材,均要求结合自身经历,抒发内心感悟。发现“感悟类”写作在各学校考察频率较高,尤其是集中在二模,相信三模也不在少数。 | | |
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感悟类作文怎么写?
首先要了解初考作文的基本结构经典三段式结构
举例
第一段:引入 It is an unforgettable experience in my life.
第二段:叙事 Last week, I took part in / I experienced … It was meaningful and special.
第三段:感悟 From this experience, I learn that + 道理 I will ______ in my daily life.或 I believe I will become better and better.
一句话说清作文结构
事件简述 + I learn that + 道理 + 今后打算 + 收尾

①要注意文章立意,积极正能量,不说丧气摆烂的话。
②作文没话可写的饱饱注意:
中考英语作文里,没人要求你写的必须真实,也没有侦探去考察你的叙事是否真实。老师判卷更看重逻辑和表达,语法,单词拼写。为了支撑观点、写好感悟,完全可以合理虚构。不要纠结你是不是真的亲身经历过这件事。关键是要编得真实、具体、不违和。
③不要背范文,但可以背出彩的句子。
- From this experience, I learn a lot. 从这次经历中,我学到很多。
- This experience teaches me an important lesson. 这次经历教会我一个重要道理。
- It makes me think a lot. 这让我深有感触。
- Nothing is impossible if I try my best. 只要努力,一切皆有可能。
- Persistence leads to success. 坚持才能成功。
- We should value every moment and cherish what we have. 我们应当珍惜时光、珍惜所拥有的。
- Kindness can warm others and make the world better. 善意能温暖他人,让世界更美好。
- We should step out of our comfort zone and challenge ourselves. 我们要走出舒适区,挑战自我。
- Small efforts can make a big difference. 微小的努力也能带来巨大改变。
- I will keep it in mind and become a better person. 我会牢记在心,努力成为更好的自己。
- I will try my best to keep this good quality in my future life. 今后我会坚持这份品质。
- I’ll start with small things and make progress day by day. 我会从小事做起,一天天进步。