第四部分写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
46. 你校英文报正开展“数字化时代学生线上学习”主题讨论,请你以“My Views on Online Learning”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你的理解和看法;
2.陈述理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Views on Online Learning
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【答案】
My Views on Online Learning
In the digital age, online learning has become an increasingly popular choice for students. In my opinion, it offers both advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, online learning provides great flexibility. Students can access courses at any time and from anywhere, fitting study around their own schedules. Moreover, a vast amount of learning resources are available online, which enriches the learning experience.
On the other hand, it also has drawbacks. The lack of face-to-face interaction with teachers and classmates may lead to feelings of isolation. And without strict supervision, some students may have difficulty concentrating on their studies.
In conclusion, online learning is a double-edged sword. We should make full use of its benefits while finding ways to overcome its limitations.
【解析】
【导语】本次写作要求以“My Views on Online Learning”为题,针对学校英文报“数字化时代学生线上学习”主题讨论写短文投稿,需阐述对线上学习的理解和看法,并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
选择:choice → option
灵活性:flexibility → mobility
大量:a vast amount of → a great deal of
缺点:drawbacks → disadvantages
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Online learning provides great flexibility.
拓展句:Online learning, which has revolutionized the traditional learning model, provides great flexibility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Students can access courses at any time and from anywhere, fitting study around their own schedules.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】Moreover, a vast amount of learning resources are available online, which enriches the learning experience.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
第二节(满分25分)
47. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a warm sunny day in the yard, a small sound came from the center of a flower. Out of the colorful flowers popped a little bee.
Cho moved back in fear and shouted to her friend Mateo, “Watch out! It might hurt you!” She waved her hands to shoo the tiny creature away. As a kid, Cho always thought bees were just annoying troubles that brought nothing but stings (叮咬).
But Mateo, whose grandpa was known as the “Beeman,” shook his head. He remembered his grandpa’s words: “When you help a bee, you are actually helping your own future dinner.” So he explained softly to Cho, “Bees aren’t here to hurt us. They pollinate (授粉) one-third of the food we eat. Without their hard work, our garden wouldn’t grow any sunflowers, apples, or peas.” Thinking the words over, Cho nodded in agreement.
The two looked at the tiny creature with respect, knowing that every bee was essential to the world. However, the bee seemed to be in deep trouble. It stayed still on a flower, whose legs were trembling. It was simply too tired or too weak to fly. They quickly mixed a spoonful of sugar water to feed it, hoping to give the bee some energy. Moments later, it still rested on the flower, shaking and unable to move its tiny wings.
Determined to save it, the two friends decided to make Mateo’s balcony (阳台) a heaven for it and other bees. They gathered some plastic bottles and other materials, planning to build a “Bee Hotel.” They hoped such a shelter would provide safe cells for bees.
But before they could begin, the sky turned grey, and a strong wind began to blow. With the storm approaching fast, the materials were still lying all around on the balcony. The two friends knew they had to act fast as the first raindrops began to fall.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mateo and Cho hurried to build the “Bee Hotel”.
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The next morning, the sun rose over the balcony.
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【答案】 Mateo and Cho hurried to build the “Bee Hotel”. They divided the work: Cho sorted the plastic bottles and cut them into small sections, while Mateo lined the inside with soft grass to make it warm and comfortable. The rain began to pour down, so they took turns holding an umbrella to protect the materials and the weak bee on the flower. They worked quickly but carefully, sticking the bottle sections together and placing them in a sheltered corner of the balcony. Finally, they gently picked up the bee and put it inside one of the soft cells. Exhausted but happy, they watched the bee settle down before rushing back indoors.
The next morning, the sun rose over the balcony. Mateo and Cho ran to check the “Bee Hotel” eagerly. To their joy, the little bee was crawling out of the cell, its wings no longer trembling. It flew around the balcony for a while, as if saying thanks, before flying off into the garden. Nearby, they found more bees hovering around the flowers. The two friends smiled at each other, knowing they had done something meaningful. From that day on, they kept the “Bee Hotel” clean and added more flowers, turning the balcony into a real haven for bees.
【解析】
【导语】本文以“拯救小蜜蜂、搭建蜜蜂旅馆”为线索展开,讲述了Cho原本害怕蜜蜂,在好友Mateo的讲解下了解蜜蜂的重要性,两人发现一只陷入困境的蜜蜂,决定搭建“蜜蜂旅馆”救助它,却遭遇暴雨,最终合力完成搭建并成功帮助蜜蜂的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写
① 由第一段首句“Mateo和Cho匆忙去搭建“蜜蜂旅馆”。”可知,接下来可描写两人分工合作搭建蜜蜂旅馆的过程,突出暴雨来临后的匆忙与细心,以及对小蜜蜂的保护。
② 由第二段首句“第二天早上,太阳从阳台升起。”可知,接下来可描写两人查看蜜蜂旅馆的场景,重点写小蜜蜂恢复活力的样子,以及两人从中获得的成就感。
2. 续写线索
暴雨来临,两人分工搭建蜜蜂旅馆——冒雨保护材料和小蜜蜂——完成搭建,将蜜蜂安置其中——次日清晨查看,蜜蜂恢复活力——两人感受到帮助蜜蜂的意义,守护蜜蜂家园
3.词类激活
行为类
①倾盆大雨:the rain began to pour down/it rained cats and dogs
②保护:protect/preserve
③放置:place/position/lay
④颤抖:tremble/shake
情绪类
①高兴的:happy/delighted
②疲惫的:exhausted/worn-out
【点睛】【高分句型1】They worked quickly but carefully, sticking the bottle sections together and placing them in a sheltered corner of the balcony.(运用了现在分词sticking作状语)
【高分句型2】Exhausted but happy, they watched the bee settle down before rushing back indoors.(运用了形容词作状语)
【高分句型3】To their joy, the little bee was crawling out of the cell, its wings no longer trembling.(运用了独立主格结构)