第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mark had a secret: he couldn’t ride a bike. It wasn’t because he never tried. His father taught him one summer when he was seven. He ran alongside him, holding the seat, and shouting “Keep pedaling (踩踏板)!” But Mark’s balance was terrible. He fell into the bushes, and both knees bled. After two weeks of trying, his dad sighed, “Maybe next year.” But that “next year” never came. The childhood shame stayed with him.
Then, he grew up and had a family of his own. He never shared the secret with anyone but his wife, Lena. Most of the time, it didn’t matter. When friends invited him on bike trips, he volunteered to drive and bring snacks. When the kids were old enough to learn to ride, Lena offered to teach them.
But lately, his twelve-year-old daughter Alice and seven-year-old son Bob were planning the first-ever “Family Bike Adventure.” They had picked a campsite (营地) by the lake and mapped a biking route around it. Every night, they’d argue about who would win the family race. Mark smiled through every conversation, but inside, his stomach tightened. In every other way, Mark was a perfect dad. He never missed a school event and could fix everything in the house. Admitting he couldn’t ride? That was hard.
So he made a plan. After the kids went to bed, he slipped out and wheeled a bike to the empty market parking lot to practise. But thirty years after that summer, his body still remembered nothing. The bike seemed to have a mind of its own, and he just couldn’t control it. His legs shook. His hands ached. Sometimes he would crash into the wall.
The next day, Alice, a considerate girl, asked about his bruised (淤青的) knees. But he said nothing. After several nights, Lena said to him, “You don’t have to do this. The kids don’t care. No one can do everything.” Mark shook his head. “They think I can. Let me try a little longer.”
One night, after he fell off the bike again, he heard a voice. “Dad?” His heart stopped.
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It was Alice, who had followed him out of curiosity.
That Saturday, when his family went biking, Mark stayed at the campsite happily.
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It was Alice, who had followed him out of curiosity. A puzzled look crossed her face, and she asked softly, “Dad, are you all right? Did you fall because you’re not feeling well?” Mark’s heart raced wildly, and he broke out in a cold sweat. Words failed him, and for a moment, he just stood there awkwardly. Gathering every bit of courage, he finally admitted the truth: he had never learned to ride a bike in his life. Alice froze in surprise at first, but she quickly knelt down to help him up. “Don’t worry, Dad,” she said warmly. “I’ll teach you. We can practise together.”
是爱丽丝，她出于好奇跟了出来。一丝困惑掠过她的脸庞，她轻声问道：“爸爸，你没事吧？你是不是不舒服才摔倒的？”马克的心狂跳起来，额头上冒出了冷汗。他一时语塞，尴尬地站在原地。他鼓起全身的勇气，终于说出了真相：他这辈子从来没学会过骑自行车。爱丽丝起初惊讶地愣住了，但很快蹲下来扶他起身。“别担心，爸爸，”她温柔地说，“我来教你，我们可以一起练习。”
That Saturday, when his family went biking, Mark stayed at the campsite happily. The old shame no longer weighed on his heart. Instead, he busied himself setting up the tent and preparing snacks for everyone. When Alice and Bob returned from their ride, they pulled out a small bike they’d brought along. Holding the seat firmly, Alice walked beside him, just as his father had done decades ago. Slowly but steadily, Mark pedaled forward, his fear melting away with every cheer from his kids. In that moment, he realized the “next year” his father had once promised him had finally come—not as a little boy, but as a father, learning to ride with his daughter by his side.
那个周六，当家人去骑行时，马克开心地留在了营地。多年的羞愧感不再压在他心头。相反，他忙着搭帐篷、为大家准备零食。当爱丽丝和鲍勃骑行回来时，他们拿出了特意带来的一辆小自行车。爱丽丝紧紧扶着车座，走在他身边，就像几十年前他父亲做的那样。马克缓慢却稳稳地向前蹬着车，每听到孩子的一声欢呼，他的恐惧就消散一分。那一刻，他意识到父亲当年承诺的“明年”终于到来了——不是作为一个小男孩，而是作为一个父亲，在女儿的陪伴下重新学骑车。
读后续写范文 亮点表达纯文本整理（可直接背诵积累）
一、神态情绪描写
1. A puzzled look crossed her face.
一丝困惑掠过她的脸庞。
2. Mark’s heart raced wildly.
马克的心怦怦狂跳。
3. break out in a cold sweat
冒出冷汗、惊出一身冷汗
4. Words failed him.
他一时语塞、不知该说些什么。
5. Gathering every bit of courage
鼓足全部勇气
6. freeze in surprise
惊讶得愣住了
二、动作行为描写
1. ask softly
轻声问道
2. knelt down to help him up
蹲下身扶他起来
3. said warmly
语气温柔地说道
4. busied himself setting up the tent and preparing snacks
忙着搭帐篷、准备零食
5. Holding the seat firmly, Alice walked beside him.
爱丽丝紧紧扶着车座，陪在他身旁慢慢走。
6. pedaled forward slowly but steadily
缓慢却平稳地向前蹬车
三、心理感悟高级表达
1. The old shame no longer weighed on his heart.
往日的羞愧不再压在他心头。
2. his fear melting away
内心的恐惧慢慢消散
3. not as a little boy, but as a father
不再是懵懂孩童，而是一位父亲
四、万能衔接&结尾升华句型
1. She looked at him in confusion and asked softly…
她满脸困惑，轻声问道……
2. He finally admitted the truth.
他终于道出了实情。
3. In that moment, he realized that…
在那一刻，他恍然大悟……
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