2026年深圳一模阅读B篇二次开发:克服恐惧类读后续写仿写

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克服恐惧类写作专题复习

【任务说明】模仿B篇原文中的情绪描写手法，写一个80-120词的英文片段，描写一次紧张害怕的经历，写在作业本上。

【必须使用的表达】（至少选用4个）

1)I found myself...我发现自己……

2)I would never have... without...如果没有……我绝不会……

3)Fixing my eyes on...我盯着……

4)I inched along...我慢慢挪动……

5)I was flooded with a rush of intense excitement and huge relief涌上一阵……

6)Though scared speechless, I couldn’t help...虽然吓得说不出话，我还是忍不住……

7)I looked up in disbelief and saw...我难以置信地抬头，看见……

8)Once the tension faded, I let out a sigh of relief/ a laugh/a long breath紧张感一消退……

9)Time stood still时间仿佛凝固了

【四个场景选择】

请从以下四个场景中选择一个进行描写：

场景一：第一次上台演讲:站在台上，面对全班同学，紧张得说不出话，最后顺利完成(stage, audience, trembling voice, applause)

场景二：夜间独自回家:走在漆黑的小路上，总觉得身后有人，最后发现只是风吹树叶(dark, footsteps, shadow, sigh of relief)

场景三：高空玻璃桥: 站在透明的玻璃桥上，不敢往下看，硬着头皮走完全程(glass bridge, drop below, shaky legs, proud)

场景四：自己克服恐惧的一次经历

【文章结构】

部分内容建议使用的表达

开端描写紧张时刻的开始①或⑦或⑨

经过描写具体行为和情绪②③④⑥

转折描写紧张感的变化⑧ 

结尾描写克服后的感受⑤

【情绪词汇】

Fear: terrified, panicked, frozen, anxious/anxiety

Relief/Joy: relieved, thrilled, overjoyed, proud

二、完形填空（先选择正确答案，然后用红笔在可以借鉴于续写的句子下画横线）

I’ve always been terrified of heights. The thought of being up high made my heart41  and my hands sweat. But one summer, my friends and I decided to try rock climbing, and I chose to face my 42.

We arrived at the climbing gym, and the43 walls above us seemed like a huge challenge. When my friends eagerly put on their climbing belts and started practicing on the lower routes, I 44. I watched them with a mix of admiration and 45 . I could feel a wave of self-doubt wash over me. When it was my46, I finally took a deep breath and tied my belt.

The first few feet were manageable, but as I climbed higher, my fear47. My hands shook, and I grasped the holds 48 . “You’re doing great!” my friends 49 from below, but I could barely hear them for the thundering of my own heart. I looked down and immediately 50it, as the ground seemed so far away.

I51, trying to steady my breathing. I knew I had two choices: give up or keep going. I chose the latter. Slowly, I 52upward. The higher I climbed, the more my confidence grew. When I finally reached the top, I couldn’t 53 the smile on my face and felt a sense of 54.

That day, I learned that sometimes, the hardest part of overcoming a fear is taking the first55 .

41. A. breakB. flyC. singD. race

42. A. dangerB. fearC. dutyD. future

43. A. dividingB. bearingC. toweringD. enclosing

44.A.complainedB. hesitatedC. agreedD. failed

45. A. anxietyB. sympathyC. gratitudeD. desire

46. A. choiceB. favoriteC. turnD. way

47. A. faded awayB. moved onC. held backD. built up

48. A. tightlyB. lightlyC. calmlyD. skillfully

49. A. stressedB. cheeredC. jokedD. responded

50. A. regrettedB. discoveredC. enjoyedD. made

51. A. criedB. wavedC. frozeD. accepted

52. A. edgedB. jumpedC. landedD. guided

53. A. putB. containC. forceD. feel

54. A. responsibilityB. directionC. balanceD. achievement

55. A. sightB. impressionC. stepD. chance

作业示例如下：When I stood before the towering wall, I found myself frozen with fear. I would never have taken the first step without my friends cheering from below. Fixing my eyes on the next hold, I began to climb. As I went higher, my hands shook and I inched along nervously. Suddenly, time stood still when I looked down—the ground seemed miles away. Though scared speechless, I couldn’t help glancing up at the top. Once the tension faded, I found my rhythm. When I finally reached the top, I was flooded with a rush of relief and pride. I looked up in disbelief and saw how far I had come.